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The maps show several changes in the village of Stokeford during the 1930 and 2010 years

The maps show several changes in the village of Stokeford during the 1930 and 2010 years OVeY3

The maps show several changes in the village of Stokeford during the 1930 and 2010 years. The most noticeable change was increasing in accommodations while there have been eliminated farms. In 1930, there have been two enormous farmlands in the south and north of the village. There were gardens in the center of Stokeford with two pine trees and only one apple tree next to the three large houses. It had two different shops next to the post office in the west and one primary school in the east. There were rarely ten houses in the village. Turning to the 2010 map, it could be seen that two farmlands were gone, being replaced by many houses. One part of the gardens where there was an apple tree has changed into few houses and there have constructed two large houses and one Retirement home next to them. Two shops were removed while there were made two large houses on the backside of the primary school.

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Stokeford
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 one apple tree next
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 to the post office in the west and one primary school in the east. There were rarely ten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 in the village.

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 that two farmlands were gone
, being replaced
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many
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houses
. One part of the gardens where there was an apple tree has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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 and there have constructed two large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 and one Retirement home next
 to them. Two shops were removed
 while there were made
 two large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 on the backside of the primary school. 