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The given diagram shows the wool is produced for personal and industrial use.write a report for a university professor describing the process in detail.

The given diagram shows the wool is produced for personal and industrial use. write a report for a university professor describing the process in detail. wB5Nm

The given process chart illustrates the steps about the wool is produceed for personal and industrial use. Hence, it is apparent that there are eight steps are involved. It begins from sheep shearing and end at knitting and jacket or carpet. It can be clearly seen that the first step is that sheep are shared. Secondly, woola are obtained for cleaning. Thirdly, some are used for recycled which was left are ussd string. After that, string are stroed in tuft. Next step is that, it are made spun balls of yarn. Finally balls are used knitting and jacket or carpet.

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given
 process chart illustrates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 about the wool is Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "produced", the past tense form of the verb 'produce'?produced
produceed
 for personal and industrial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

Hence
, it is apparent that there are eight You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
are involved
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 from sheep shearing and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 at knitting and jacket or carpet.

It can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that sheep are shared
. Secondly
, Possible spelling mistake found.woolWoolfwoo lawool a
woola
are obtained
 for cleaning. Thirdly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for recycled which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 are Possible spelling mistake found.usedUSSRUSSESSDUSDSSD
ussd
 string.

After that, string are Possible spelling mistake found.storedstrokedstrode
stroed
 in tuft. Next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is that, it Did you mean "is"?is
are
 made spun balls of yarn. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 balls are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 knitting and jacket or carpet. 