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The given diagram shows the wool is produced for personal and industrial use.write a report for a university professor describing the process in detail.

The given diagram shows the wool is produced for personal and industrial use. write a report for a university professor describing the process in detail. wB5Nm
The given process chart illustrates the steps about the wool is produceed for personal and industrial use. Hence, it is apparent that there are eight steps are involved. It begins from sheep shearing and end at knitting and jacket or carpet. It can be clearly seen that the first step is that sheep are shared. Secondly, woola are obtained for cleaning. Thirdly, some are used for recycled which was left are ussd string. After that, string are stroed in tuft. Next step is that, it are made spun balls of yarn. Finally balls are used knitting and jacket or carpet.
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process chart illustrates the
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about the wool is
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produceed
for personal and industrial
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use
.

Hence
, it is apparent that there are eight
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steps
are involved
. It
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begins
from sheep shearing and
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end
at knitting and jacket or carpet.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that the
first
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step
is that sheep
are shared
.
Secondly
,
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woola
are obtained
for cleaning.
Thirdly
,
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are
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used
for recycled which was
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left
are
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ussd
string.

After that, string are
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stroed
in tuft.
Next
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step
is that, it
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are
made spun balls of yarn.
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Finally
balls are
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used
knitting and jacket or carpet.

IELTS academic The given diagram shows the wool is produced for personal and industrial use. write a report for a university professor describing the process in detail.

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4 paragraphs
100 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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