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The graph illustrate the number of foreign tourists who went to tree different ereas in a UK country from 1987 to 2007

The graph illustrate the number of foreign tourists who went to tree different ereas in a UK country from 1987 to 2007 6xGM0
The graph illustrate the number of foreign tourists who went to tree different ereas in a UK country from 1987 to 2007. Overall, while overseas visitors show heigh ingrease in the coast and in the lake. But number of foreign visitors showed relatively stagination in the mountain. In 1987, while 10 thousands outer visitors went to the lake, the numbee of travels increased until nearly 28 thousands in 1992. Almost, the growth showed itselves in fild of the mountine tueism. So in 1987 it was 40 thousands, but this travels was aproximately 29 thousands between 1987 and 1992. In 1992 number of visitors began to grow and reached aproximately from 36 thousands to 50  thousands until to 1997. Similarly the growth contunied in field of the lakes journey. So number of visitors was 40 thousands in 1997. In 2002 the growth reached to heigest number nearly to 75 thousands. Similarly same growth was in the coast, so number of outer visitors was 60 thousands between 1997 and 2002. And the growth contunied until 2007 and it was aproximately 76 thousands. Aldo most of outer visitors went to the lakes. But the number suddenly show downward trend between 2002 and 2007. So while number of visitors was aproximately 75 thousands in 2002, but it down until 50 thousands in 2007. Sinilarly this decrease showed itselves in the coast from 19987 and 1992. In the 1987 number of tourist was 40 thousands but it decreased to 35 thousands.
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of outer
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was 60 thousands between 1997 and 2002. And the
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Aldo most of outer
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it down until 50 thousands in 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrate the number of foreign tourists who went to tree different ereas in a UK country from 1987 to 2007

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