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maps describe changes of a park

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The given maps compare the layout of a public infrastructure in 1920 and in recent. There are varied changes in the facilities and the settings. In 1920, there were two entrances placed opposite to eachother, one from the Arnold Avenue, and one from the Eldon street. Entering from both entrances, visitors can easily admire a water fountain in the centre, and to the right of a musician performing booth. There were several seats intertwin with small rose gardens in the park. At the right conner nearly the Avenue were a pond to grow some plants under water. A rectangular glasshouse was set at the opposite conner nearly the street. After decades, the park have experienced a lot of changes. The fountain has been replaced by a square rose garden with some spots for sitting around its sides. The original musician displaying booth has been removed, and a large theatre has been built instead. Other features like pond and glasshouse has also been gone to leave places for a cafe shop, a children's playground and a water decoration, respectively. There is a brand-new underground entrance added to the right side of the park, with a car parking area.
The
given
maps compare the layout of a public infrastructure in 1920 and in recent. There
are varied
changes
in the facilities and the settings.

In 1920, there were two entrances placed opposite to
eachother
, one from the Arnold Avenue, and one from the Eldon street. Entering from both entrances, visitors can
easily
admire a water fountain in the
centre
, and to the right of a musician performing booth. There were several seats
intertwin
with
small
rose gardens in the park. At the right
conner
nearly
the Avenue were a pond to grow
some
plants under water. A rectangular glasshouse
was set
at the opposite
conner
nearly
the street.

After decades, the park have experienced
a lot of
changes
. The fountain has
been replaced
by a square rose garden with
some
spots for sitting around its sides. The original musician displaying booth has
been removed
, and a large
theatre
has
been built
instead
. Other features like pond and glasshouse has
also
been gone
to
leave
places for a
cafe
shop, a children's playground and a water decoration,
respectively
. There is a brand-new underground entrance
added
to the right side of the park, with a car parking area.
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