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The maps show planned changes in the Sheldon area between now and 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisions where relevant.

The maps show planned changes in the Sheldon area between now and 2030. nRd8P

The maps illustrate a prediction of how Sheldon area will develope in 2030 and differences in area between now and in the future. In general, there are more health services which will be built up for residents than now. Another significant change is the development of transport system with the appearance of the bicycle lane and the tram service. The industry of the area has a great change from a glass factory into the industrial area. The town area will be transformed into a city center which is opened just for the walking purpose. The system of roads in the city will have a noticeable change. The main Sheldon Road will be divided into lane for motorbikes and lane for cyclists only. Beside that, small roads will be set up to connect the city center with the residential zone, the shopping center, the sport center, the industrial area and the tram service. The bus station will be replaced by the tram service. The glass factory will be closed to the opening of a large industrial area. The old cinema is closed today which will be upgraded to a modern IMAX and 3D cineplex at the same place. The blank space in the south of the city will use to build up a city car park. All changes of the city will seem to bring positive effects for the city, but the destruction of the forest to build up a gym and sport center may be the negative point of the development.

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develope
 in 2030 and differences in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 between This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and in the future. In general
, there are more health You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 which will be built
 up for residents than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Another significant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is the development of transport system with the appearance of the bicycle lane and the tram You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
. The industry of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has a great You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 from a glass factory into the industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. The town You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 will be transformed
 into a city center which is opened
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for the walking purpose. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 system of roads in the city will have a noticeable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 main Sheldon Road will be divided
 into lane for motorbikes and lane for cyclists This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Beside that, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 roads will be set
 up to connect the city center with the residential zone, the shopping center, the sport center, the industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and the tram You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
. The bus station will be replaced
 by the tram You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
. The glass factory will be closed
 to the opening of a large industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 cinema is closed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 which will be upgraded
 to a modern IMAX and 3D Possible spelling mistake found.Cineplex
cineplex
 at the same place. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 blank space in the south of the city will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to build up a city car park. All You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 of the city will seem to bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 effects for the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the destruction of the forest to build up a gym and sport center may be the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 point of the development. 