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The line graph compares the sales of three different kinds of books during the period from 2002 to 2006.

The line graph compares the sales of three different kinds of books during the period from 2002 to 2006. 7JL5b

In 2002, the figure for adults' fictions came top with 45 million dollars, followed by that for children’s books and educational books. Afterwards, the sales of adults’ fictions decreased quickly to 37 million dollars. Despite a slight increase in the following year, they experienced a drop of 10 million dollars from 2004 to 2006. By contrast, there was a big rise of 16 million dollars in the sales of children's books during this period. In 2002, they were 33 million dollars and ended up at 56 million dollars in 2006 when they were the highest among these three kinds of books. When it comes to the figure for educational books, it fluctuated between 2002 and 2006. It was the smallest at the beginning (25 million dollars), although it exceeded the figure for adults, fictions in the end (33 million dollars). Overall, the sales of children’s books and educational books rose markedly while the popularity of adults’ fictions dropped.

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