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The two maps reveal several changes to Riversdale University between 1973 and 2010. By 2010, improvements had been to service facilities. The nature reserve in the campus’s south west in 1973 made way for second car park adjacent to a new tram stop. The previous car park located in the north-east corner had also been extended. In 2010, two bridges joined the two parts of the campus compared with only in 1973. In addition, there was relocation of the student union building north of the existing sports centre. There were also noticeable changes to the educational facilities. The library, which remained in the centre of the campus, was extended. South of this, a large, new building became the shared home of the Law and Social Sciences. In the 37-year period, there were no changes to the Sciences, Economics and Administration buildings. In contrast, Fine Arts no longer appeared to exist and the Information Sciences faculty took over this facility. A future plan includes the building of a medical school by 2019. Overall, by 2010, there were several new developments that showed an improvement to amenities and reflected new trends in university studies.

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