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Illustrate the energy production such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas from 1983 to 2003

Illustrate the energy production such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas from 1983 to 2003 bxO0Y
The given pie chart illustrate the enregy production from 5 various sources such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas In 1983, oil and coal are the most neccessary fuel but over 20 years, it seems clear that the increasing directions belong o oil and nuclear power. Oil was the dominant genre, accounted for 42% and dipped minimally to 385 in 2003. Hydropower stayed t 4% over the span of 20 years. Moving to natural gas, coal and nuclear power, which flutuated between the 20 years. The portion of natural gas ascend impressive from 11% to 21%. Coal has a significantly drop for 10% after years. About the last production, nuclear power, which slight surge from 20% to 24% in 2003.
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production from 5 various sources such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas

In 1983, oil and coal are the most
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neccessary
fuel
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over 20 years, it seems
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clear
that the increasing directions belong o oil and nuclear power.

Oil was the dominant genre, accounted for 42% and dipped
minimally
to 385 in 2003. Hydropower stayed t 4% over the span of 20 years. Moving to natural gas, coal and nuclear power, which
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flutuated
between the 20 years. The portion of natural gas
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ascend
impressive from 11% to 21%. Coal has a
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significantly drop
for 10% after years. About the last production, nuclear power, which slight surge from 20% to 24% in 2003.
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IELTS academic Illustrate the energy production such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas from 1983 to 2003

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