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Illustrate the energy production such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas from 1983 to 2003

Illustrate the energy production such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas from 1983 to 2003 bxO0Y

The given pie chart illustrate the enregy production from 5 various sources such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas In 1983, oil and coal are the most neccessary fuel but over 20 years, it seems clear that the increasing directions belong o oil and nuclear power. Oil was the dominant genre, accounted for 42% and dipped minimally to 385 in 2003. Hydropower stayed t 4% over the span of 20 years. Moving to natural gas, coal and nuclear power, which flutuated between the 20 years. The portion of natural gas ascend impressive from 11% to 21%. Coal has a significantly drop for 10% after years. About the last production, nuclear power, which slight surge from 20% to 24% in 2003.

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 pie chart illustrate the Possible spelling mistake found.energy
enregy
 production from 5 various sources such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas

In 1983, oil and coal are the most Possible spelling mistake found.necessary
neccessary
 fuel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 over 20 years, it seems This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the increasing directions belong o oil and nuclear power.

Oil was the dominant genre, accounted for 42% and dipped minimally
 to 385 in 2003. Hydropower stayed t 4% over the span of 20 years. Moving to natural gas, coal and nuclear power, which Possible spelling mistake found.fluctuated
flutuated
 between the 20 years. The portion of natural gas Did you mean "ascends"?ascends
ascend
 impressive from 11% to 21%. Coal has a You used an adverb ('significantly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('drop') instead of another adjective.
significantly drop
 for 10% after years. About the last production, nuclear power, which slight surge from 20% to 24% in 2003. 

IELTS academic Illustrate the energy production such as hydropower, oil, nuclear power, coal and natural gas from 1983 to 2003

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123 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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