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the graph below shows average obesity rates in the USA according to gender from 2000 to 2008

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The provided chart compares men and women in terms of the percentages of obesity in the USA over the period of eight years from 2000 to 2008. Overall, the proportions of overweight in all two gender had upward trends. Meanwhile, the men witnessed the most notable increase in the overweight rate. In 2000, the data only shows the figure for the men who were obese reached 28%. In 2002, the women accounted for the highest rate of overweight with 34%, while the men had the lower obesity rate with 29%. During the following years, there was a consistent growth in the rates of obesity in the women from 34% to 37% and reach the peak of 40% in 2008. Similarly, between 2002 and 2004, the men saw a dramatic increase in the obesity rate from 28% to 33%. In the next two years, the percentage of overweight in the men had a slight climb to 35% and continued to grow remarkably at the end of the period.

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 and women in terms of the percentages of obesity in the USA over the period of eight years from 2000 to 2008.

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overweight
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During the following years, there was a consistent growth in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
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 of obesity in the women from 34% to 37% and reach the peak of 40% in 2008. Similarly
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men
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 from 28% to 33%. In the next
 two years, the percentage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobesecorpulentpudgy
overweight
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
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 had a slight climb to 35% and continued to grow remarkably
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