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The line graph below illustrates the proportion of people who watched five genres of films on TV in Australia from 1990 to 2010.

The line graph below illustrates the proportion of people who watched five genres of films on TV in Australia from 1990 to 2010. G9Wee
The line graph provides data on the rate of Australian TV viewers who watched five types of films including Comedy, Romance, Musical, Action, and Horror between 1990 and 2010. Overall, across the 20 years period, Romance and Action attracted most viewers, whereas Comedy and Horror became less popular. Moreover, the percentage of people who watched Musical almost remained stable at about 10% over the given years. In terms of the proportion of people watching Romance and Action was on the rise during the period. Specifically, there was a significant rise in Romance watching from about 15% in 1990 to 80% in 2010. Similarly, the figure for people who watched Action increase sharply by 40% in the same period. On the contrary, there were fewer individuals enjoyed watching Comedy and Horror during twenty years. In particular, the rate of people watching Comedy declined from 60% in 1990 to around 35% in 2010. The figure for Horror also decreased from 75% to 25% over this time. It is remarkable that the percentage of people who watched Musical on TV leveled off at roughly 10% across the twenty years.
The line graph provides data on the rate of Australian TV viewers
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watched
five types of films including
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Comedy
, Romance, Musical,
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Action
, and
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Horror
between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, across the 20 years period, Romance and
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Action
attracted most viewers, whereas
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Comedy
and
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Horror
became less popular.
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, the percentage of
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people
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who
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watched
Musical almost remained stable at about 10% over the
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given
years.

In terms of the proportion of
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people
watching Romance and
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Action
was on the rise during the period.
Specifically
, there was a significant rise in Romance watching from about 15% in 1990 to 80% in 2010.
Similarly
, the figure for
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people
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who
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watched
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Action
increase
sharply
by 40% in the same period.

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, there were fewer individuals enjoyed watching
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Comedy
and
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Horror
during twenty years.
In particular
, the rate of
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people
watching
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Comedy
declined from 60% in 1990 to around 35% in 2010. The figure for
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Horror
also
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people
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Musical on TV leveled off at roughly 10% across the twenty years.
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IELTS academic The line graph below illustrates the proportion of people who watched five genres of films on TV in Australia from 1990 to 2010.

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