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Renewable energy rate in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010

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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of renewable energy in total energy of Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey between 1997 to 2010. Overall, Sweden and Iceland saw an upward trend in the use of renewable energy, while the use of that in Australia decreased. Turkey was the only country that had fluctuations in how it used renewable energy. Iceland made the highest consumption of renewable sources. The percentage of renewable source use in Iceland was nearly 46% in 1997, and it significantly increased in 2010, when over two-thirds of the power consumed in Iceland were renewable. In comparison, Sweden burned only about 6% in 1997 and slightly went up by almost 3% until 2010. On the other hand, there was a steady decline in using renewable energy in Australia, from about 9% in 1997 to approximately 5% in 2010. Turkey, in 1997, consumed almost 38% of renewable power. It rose to roughly 41% in the next 3 years. In 2010, the figure, however, experienced a marked reduction, when only around one-third of the total power used could be renewed.
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of Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey
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of that in Australia decreased. Turkey was the
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country that had fluctuations in how it
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Iceland made the highest consumption of
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sources. The percentage of
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in Australia, from about 9% in 1997 to approximately 5% in 2010. Turkey, in 1997, consumed almost 38% of
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power. It rose to roughly 41% in the
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IELTS academic Renewable energy rate in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010

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