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The table below shows the resultof a 20 years study into why adults in the UK attends arts events.

The table below shows the resultof a 20 years study into why adults in the UK attends arts events. anKX

The table illustrates four reasons why adults in the UK attend arts during a period of 20 years. Overall, it can be clearly seen that during these years main reason was desire to see specific performancer or artists while the least important reason was work or bussines. The percentage of people who attend arts events for desire to see specific artist or perfomer has remained considerably stable over the twenty years period. The figures for 20 years ago and today only 58% and 56% respectively. People who attend for accompaying children has shown significant increase percentage for 20 years ago was 9% while today it reaches 24%. Moreover, who attends arts for special occasion or celebration reason the percentage fell slightly from 27% 20 years ago to 20% decade ago and dropping dramatically 9% today. There was a slight increase for the work or bussines from 6% twenty years ago to 11% today.

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