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the maps show Clowick Arts center in 2005 and today

the maps show Clowick Arts center in 2005 and today Nl1Lq

The two maps illustrates changes to Colwick Arts center in 2005 and today. It can be seen clearly that the Arts center made a number of changes during the period such as modern building and green space. In the past, the meeting room between snack bar and toilet. It was located in the top left–hand corner of Center, in addition, the new meeting room was built next to it. The toilet was replaced by café. The two gallery was merged into one and moved to the left of central. The concert all and cinema were in one building in the middle of center, they separated them and constructed two building next to each other in the top right-hand corner in the central, it increased on the size. Also, Drama studio was created opposite the cinema. What is more, A central exhibition area located in the middle of center. In 2005, there was a wasteland in the bottom of Center, however, today a stage, an outdoor exhibition and performance area in here. In addition, they plants a lots of trees and add seating area in this place. So it is clear that the Colwick Arts Centre changed and expanded during this period.

The two maps illustrates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to Colwick Arts center in 2005 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
clearly
 that the Arts center made a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 during the period such as modern building and green space.

In the past, the meeting room between snack bar and toilet. It was located
 in the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
–hand corner of Center, in addition
, the new meeting room was built
next
 to it. The toilet was replaced
 by café. The two gallery was merged
 into one and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of central. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 concert all and cinema were in one building in the middle of center, they separated them and constructed two building next
 to each other in the top right-hand corner in the central, it increased on the size. Also
, Drama studio was created
 opposite the cinema.

What is more
, A central exhibition area located in the middle of center. In 2005, there was a wasteland in the bottom of Center, however
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 a stage, an outdoor exhibition and performance area in here. In addition
, they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "plant"plant
plants
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of trees and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 seating area in this place.

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So
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the Colwick Arts Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and expanded during this period. 