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A table and bar graph shows the information regarding the visiting abroad by the UK residents

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The 100 table depicts the information regarding the purpose of visiting abroad by the UK residents along with the countries where they want to visit as per shown in the illustration initiating with holiday which was recorded to be 15246 in 1994 it increased every provided here except 1995 where it was a decreased why 348 however other reasons also followed same brand which was accounted to be 982, 896, 1030, 1045 and 990 in 1994 where as in the last two years it sharply increased to 3639 and 3957 similarly the visits to friends and relative was 2689 in in the initial year and the jump the to 3181 in 1998 moving towards a bar chart all the Western Europe was assured maximum level during 1994 to 1998 which was however nearly twenty five thousand however the North America and other areas around nearly 2500 the preference towards the North America was released moreover the most striking feature is that the holiday was exhibited more while other reasons was lesser preferred by the citizens of the UK more over Western Europe was most like the country for visiting then main areas according to the bar graph
The 100 table depicts the information regarding the purpose of visiting abroad by the UK residents along with the countries where they want to visit as per shown in the illustration initiating with holiday which
was recorded
to be 15246 in 1994 it increased every provided here except 1995 where it was a decreased why 348
however
other reasons
also
followed same brand which
was accounted
to be 982, 896, 1030, 1045 and 990 in 1994
where as
in the last two years it
sharply
increased to 3639 and 3957
similarly
the visits to friends and relative was 2689
in in
the initial year and the jump the to 3181 in 1998 moving towards a bar chart all the Western Europe
was assured
maximum level during 1994 to 1998 which was
however
nearly
twenty five
thousand
however
the North America and other areas around
nearly
2500 the preference towards the North America
was released
moreover
the most striking feature is that the holiday
was exhibited
more while other reasons was lesser preferred by the citizens of the UK more over Western Europe was most like the country for visiting then main areas according to the bar graph
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IELTS academic A table and bar graph shows the information regarding the visiting abroad by the UK residents

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