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The maps show changes to Felixstone town.

The maps show changes to Felixstone town. Jomp6
The render data illustrates how the Felixstone town underwent various changes during the time period of 34 years, ranging from 1967 to 2001. As is evident from the data, there was a hotel with a swimming pool and a tennis play area on the upper right corner in 2000 as compared to a farmland in 1967. There had been a fish market opposite the farmland which was replaced by a private beach in the later year. Golf course was located next to the shops which was situated along side of a high Street in the former year. After 34 years, apartments were erected in place of shops near the hotel. There was a sea area on the bottom where winter winds were installed on the left in 2001 right below the dunes which remained the same. A new car park was built adjoining to the hotel near the cafe and a public beach which had been a hotel and a cafe. There was a marina and fire which were removed in 1967.
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Felixstone
town underwent various
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changes
during the time period of 34 years, ranging from 1967 to 2001. As is evident from the data, there was a
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hotel
with a swimming pool and a tennis play area on the upper right corner in 2000 as compared to a farmland in 1967. There had been a fish market opposite the farmland which
was replaced
by a private beach in the later
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year
. Golf course
was located
next
to the shops which
was situated
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along side
of a high Street in the former
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year
. After 34 years, apartments
were erected
in place of shops near the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
. There was a sea area on the bottom where winter winds
were installed
on the
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left
in 2001 right below the dunes which remained the same. A new car park
was built
adjoining to the
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hotel
near the
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cafe
and a public beach which had been a
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hotel
and a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. There was a marina and fire which
were removed
in 1967.
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