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The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations.

The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations. g5lD7
The bar chart illustrates how five organizations invested money into four different aspects of the company, including machinery, building, staff training, and research. Overall, organization B invested the most money in all aspects of its business, while organisation D invested the least. Organisation B spent the biggest proportion of their investment on construction, at approximately €1. 7 billion, while organisations A, C, D, and E only invested around €0. 5 million each. The second biggest investment of organisation B was in research, at approximately €1. 6 billion, which was double the investment of organisation A in the same aspect. Organisation C invested approximately €0. 7 billion in research, while organisations D and E both invested around €0. 3 billion. Staff training was the third biggest investment of organisation B, at €1. 5 billion, however it was the biggest investment of organisation A at €1 billion. Meanwhile, organisations C, D, and E all invested approximately €0. 4 billion. Machinery was the smallest investment of organisation B, at €1. 3 billion, but the biggest investment of organisation C, at €0. 7 billion. Organisation A invested €0. 8 billion in machinery, while organisations D and E only invested half of that amount.
The bar chart illustrates how five organizations
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money into four
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, including machinery, building, staff training, and research.

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the most money in all aspects of its business, while
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D
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the least.

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on construction, at
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€1. 7
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around €0. 5 million each. The second
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around €0. 3 billion.

Staff training was the third
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€0. 8
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