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the maps show changes that took place in New Zealand over a 25 year

the maps show changes that took place in New Zealand over a 25 year YgdmN

The map illustrates the development that happened in Youngsville in New Zealand over the period from 1980 to 2005. Overall, a comparison between the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a residential area to an industrial area. In 1980, on the north of the city, a lot of trees cut down and a park were placed next to the hospital. Similarly, the residential area on the north was removed and replaced by a stadium. In addition to that, the Railway station was continued to cove the whole area until the north. In the southwest, a new warehouse and more factories were placed next to the school and the old houses were knocked down. the trees in the south east were cut down, also the houses in this area were replaced by skyscrapers.

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Youngsville
 in New Zealand over the period from 1980 to 2005.

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area
 to an industrial area.

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a lot of
 trees This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down and a park were placed
next
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, the residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 on the north was removed
 and replaced by a stadium. In addition
 to that, the Railway station was continued
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area
 until the north.

In the southwest, a new warehouse and more factories were placed
next
 to the school and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were knocked
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the
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south east
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cut
 down, also
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
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area
were replaced
 by skyscrapers. 