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Concerns affecting Environmental policy

Concerns affecting Environmental policy aAJ2d
The graph shows the ratio of concerns which affect governments and business when they make decisions about environmental policy. The vertical line describes the percentage of importance to decision makers, and the interval between each number is five percent. The horizontal line describes the factors of each concern. The government has the greatest concern in legislation, and least concern in health and safety regulations. From this part, It is predicted that governments are not interested in health and safety regulations because they are not government's responsibility to conduct virtually in particuler. Therefore, the government doesn't consider about them for Environmental Policy. In contrast, the business has tge biggest concern in saving energy because we can consider that each business institutions think profits is a priority. In additon to that, the business has the least concern in the nearly same with the government, but costs relating to disposal. The costs are very significant part in business because companies are try to save energy to reduce the extra costs.
The graph
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the ratio of
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concerns
which affect
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governments
and
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business
when they
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make
decisions about environmental policy. The vertical line
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describes
the percentage of importance to decision makers, and the interval between each number is five percent.
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The
horizontal line
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describes
the factors of each
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concern
.
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The
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government
has the greatest
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concern
in legislation, and least
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concern
in health and safety regulations. From this part, It
is predicted
that
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governments
are not interested in health and safety regulations
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because
they are not
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government
's responsibility to conduct
virtually
in
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particuler
.
Therefore
, the
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government
doesn't
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consider about them
for Environmental Policy.
In contrast
, the
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business
has
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tge
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biggest
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concern
in saving energy
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because
we can consider that each
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business
institutions
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think
profits is a priority. In
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additon
to that, the
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business
has the least
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concern
in the
nearly
same with the
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government
,
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but
costs relating to disposal. The costs are
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very
significant part in
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business
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because
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companies
are try to save energy to
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reduce
the extra costs.
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IELTS academic Concerns affecting Environmental policy

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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