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The Bar chart illustrates the results of a statistics report based on people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five different Australian cities.

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The Bar chart illustrates the results of a statistics report based on people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five different Australian cities. The five popular cities are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart those have different ratios of coffee and tea consumers. The sydney city shows a high ratio of those coustomers who went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks and the indicate ratio is 62%. It has a less customer who buy fresh coffee in last 4 weeks and that was only 43%. Not only The sydney city but also other four cities show a upward ratios in went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks. However, all the cities has a downward trend in fresh coffee consumerin last 4 weeks. Brisbane city has the less customer percentage in fresh coffee in last 4 week and that is only 33%. All the cities shows a satisfactory number of customer for instant coffee in last 4 weeks and its customer ratio does not flucutates too much. The instant coffee has a highest demand on Hobart city and that is 53%. To conclude it can be said that, in Australia instant coffee has a great demand comparing fresh coffee. On the hand, the graph shows most of the coffe consumer in Australia like to having tea or coffee in a cafe because this ratio shows a well high percentage.
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IELTS academic The Bar chart illustrates the results of a statistics report based on people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five different Australian cities.

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