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1.The charts below show fresh fruit exports in different countries in 2010.

1. The charts below show fresh fruit exports in different countries in 2010. VQY1A

The provided charts track the changes in the distribution of citrus fruits exportation in different countries in the year 2010. Overall, oranges registered the highest volume of fruits exportation while the opposite was true for other types of citrus fruit. Additionally, the quantity of grapefruits exported was roughly half that of lemons. In terms of weight, oranges were noticeably by far exported the most which was about 1 million metric tons for South Africa, 900 and 700 thousand metric tons for Egypt and United States respectively. In the domain of Lemons exportation, Turkey doubled Argentina by the ratio 2: 1 in volume and Mexico registered about 450 thousand metric tons. Grapefruits were the third commonly fruits exported which shared the same quantity for South Africa and United States, standing approximately at 230 thousand metric tons. Other types of citrus fruit exported the similar amount for United States and Israel, whose volume was remarkably 1/400 compared to Mexico.

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