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The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant. x257g
The given pictures compare the significant developments in the countryside, Meadowside, and a small town Fontoa between 1962 and the present time. Overall, it is obvious that these initially separated villages have been modernized over the years by improving in terms of transportation, infrastructure, size, etc. , and united as a single community after all. Between 1962 and 1985, Meadow witnessed exceptional alterations. First of all, the road passed the village, which was tiny in 1962, enlarged in size, and connected with another new road that passes through Fonton. Moreover, other facilities had been created for dwellers, such as a super-store on the south-western side of the area, a residential area in the west of the village. Also, a leisure complex in the center of the place is built during the same period. Regarding Fanton, there were almost no significant changes here, except the size and the road mentioned earlier. Coming to the current time, nothing had been removed from the villages but instead, they merged by continuing to expand and developed together. Meanwhile, a station has been constructed in the heart of the untied area and a hotel nearby to avoid travelers spending much time to reach the living place. In addition, a huge business park is built opposite the station, on the other side of the road, with a link to the main road for cars.
The
given
pictures compare the significant developments in the countryside,
Meadowside
, and a
small
town
Fontoa
between 1962 and the present time.
Overall
, it is obvious that these
initially
separated
villages
have
been modernized
over the years by improving in terms of transportation, infrastructure, size, etc.
,
and united as a single community
after all
. Between 1962 and 1985, Meadow witnessed exceptional alterations.
First of all
, the
road
passed the
village
, which was tiny in 1962, enlarged in size, and connected with another new
road
that passes through
Fonton
.
Moreover
, other facilities had
been created
for dwellers, such as a super-store on the south-western side of the area, a residential area in the west of the
village
.
Also
, a leisure complex in the center of the place
is built
during the same period. Regarding
Fanton
, there were almost no significant
changes
here, except the size and the
road
mentioned earlier. Coming to the
current
time, nothing had
been removed
from the
villages
but
instead
, they merged by continuing to expand and developed together. Meanwhile, a station has
been constructed
in the heart of the untied area and a hotel nearby to avoid travelers spending much time to reach the living place.
In addition
, a huge business park
is built
opposite the station, on the other side of the
road
, with a link to the main
road
for cars.
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IELTS academic The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
228 words
5.5
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