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describe a map at the present and its changes in the future

describe a map at the present and its changes in the future gYN93
The maps illustrate the current condition of a university sports center and the proposed innovations of it in the future. Overall, it is clear that the most considerable change to this sports center is the merger of two outdoor courts into one extensive area and the addition of various facilities. At the moment, inside the middle building, there is a 25-meter pool as well as a changing room, a gym, and a seating area around it, which is located in the west, north, and east respectively. Moreover, there are two outdoor courts to the west and east of the building. As stated in the second map, the two outdoor courts will be merged with the main building. While the original pool, reception, and seating will be kept intact, the gym will be enlarged. To the east of the map, the old outdoor courts will be demolished to make room for the new sports hall and two dance studios. Simultaneously, the western outdoor courts will also be turned into a leisure pool. Finally, to the south of the map, there will be two new changing rooms to each corner of the area, as well as the addition of a sports shop in the west and a cafe to the east.
The
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maps
illustrate the
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current
condition of a university
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sports
center and the proposed innovations of it in the future.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the most considerable
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change
to this
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sports
center is the merger of two
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outdoor
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courts
into one extensive area and the addition of various facilities.

At the moment, inside the middle building, there is a 25-meter pool
as well
as a changing room, a gym, and a seating area around it, which
is located
in the west, north, and east
respectively
.
Moreover
, there are two
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outdoor
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courts
to the west and east of the building.

As stated in the second
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map
, the two
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outdoor
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courts
will
be merged
with the main building. While the original pool, reception, and seating will be
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kept
intact, the gym will
be enlarged
. To the east of the
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map
, the
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old
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outdoor
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courts
will
be demolished
to
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make
room for the new
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sports
hall and two dance studios.
Simultaneously
, the western
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outdoor
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courts
will
also
be turned
into a leisure pool.
Finally
, to the south of the
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map
, there will be two new changing rooms to each corner of the area,
as well
as the addition of a
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sports
shop in the west and a
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cafe
to the east.
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IELTS academic describe a map at the present and its changes in the future

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6.5
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