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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of three divergent of nutrients such as sodium, saturated fats, and added sugar in meals that are eaten in the USA.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of three divergent of nutrients such as sodium, saturated fats, and added sugar in meals that are eaten in the USA. leVWo
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of three divergent of nutrients such as sodium, saturated fats, and added sugar in meals that are eaten in the USA. Overall, it is observed individuals that who use salt for dinner have a higher percentage vaguely half of the population, the same goes to fats with a high tendency at dinner. Nevertheless, 42% of people consume added sugar for snack time. The chart for Sodium shows a high inclination for those who add to their food at dinner. Both breakfast and snack exhibit a quarter of use of salt at 14% respectively. Additionally, 29% is dedicated to lunch. Moving on, 37% of people that deplete saturated food to their food which is 6% fewer than those in sodium. At lunch, both individuals who use up salt and saturated fat were nearly equivalent. Moreover, snack and dinner manifest a percentage of 21% and 16% individually. The pie chart for added sugar indicates a remarkable 42% of people at snack time that stood greater than any other proportions. Saturated fat and added sugar proclaim a similar percentage at 16% at their breakfast meal. Finally, 19% is accounted for those who opted sugar for lunch.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of three divergent of nutrients such as sodium,
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saturated
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fats
, and
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added
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sugar
in meals that
are eaten
in the USA.

Overall
, it
is observed
individuals that
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who
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use
salt for
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dinner
have a higher percentage
vaguely
half of the population, the same goes to
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fats
with a high tendency at
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dinner
.
Nevertheless
, 42% of
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people
consume
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added
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sugar
for
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snack
time.

The chart for Sodium
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shows
a high inclination for those
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who
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add
to their food at
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dinner
. Both breakfast and
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snack
exhibit a quarter of
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use
of salt at 14%
respectively
.
Additionally
, 29%
is dedicated
to lunch. Moving on, 37% of
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people
that deplete
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saturated
food to their food which is 6% fewer than those in sodium. At lunch, both individuals
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who
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use
up salt and
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saturated
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fat
were
nearly
equivalent.
Moreover
,
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snack
and
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dinner
manifest a percentage of 21% and 16%
individually
.

The pie chart for
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added
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sugar
indicates a remarkable 42% of
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people
at
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snack
time that stood greater than any other proportions.
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Saturated
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fat
and
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added
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sugar
proclaim a similar percentage at 16% at their breakfast meal.
Finally
, 19%
is accounted
for those
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who
opted
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sugar
for lunch.

IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the proportion of three divergent of nutrients such as sodium, saturated fats, and added sugar in meals that are eaten in the USA.

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