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The table below shows the saleries of high school teachers in 2009.

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From the table, we can clearly see that, secondary teachers in Luxembourg had the highest salery and maximum earnings, while teachers who tought in Australia and Denmark occurred the lowest income in five countries given. Teachers at high school in Luxembourg experienced the highest salery with exactly 80. 000 dollars at the beginning. However, Japan and other three contries were much lower than Luxembourg’s teacher with approximately 20. 000 dollars. After 15 years of teaching, the salery of teacher in Luxembourg still decreased with more than 100. 000$, and went up to a very high salery with more than 132. 000$ after 30 years from the beginning. Following Luxembourg was Japan, where secondary teachers were paid for nearly double within 15 years and reached to 86. 000 dollars in 37 years. The income of hugh school teachers in Australia was 28. 000 dollars and was exactly 48. 000 dollars after 15 years. The incomes of Australia teacher’s after 15 years was the same with the maximum saleries after 9 years. Denmark and Korea had a quite high saleries, starting with 45% and 30% respectively. Denmark ‘s teachers icome was exactly the same after 15 years and maximum years. Korean’s teacher went up strongly during three periods.

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