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The maps provide information concerning the area of an airport now and after renovation next year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes.

The maps provide information concerning the area of an airport now and after renovation next year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes. gALRA
The maps provide information concerning the area of an airport now and after renovation next year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes. To begin with the site of an airport now, the departures are set up in the west side and there is only one entrance. A check-in point is located on the right, opposite to the café. The departures also including a security passport control that located in front of the gates. Turning to the arrivals, only a passport control customs existing on this side. Finally, there is a short walkway from gate no. 1 to gate no. 3 and only eight gates inside. Moving on to the after development, there will be two entrances for the departures and two exits for the arrivals. In terms of the departures, the café will be located to the right next to the entrance. A bag drop point will be set up on the left and the check-in point will be moved to the right in front of the security passport control including one shop inside. Regarding the arrivals, a car hire area will be on the right next to the exit. The café and an ATM will be located to the right in front of the passport control customs. As for the gates, there will have 18 gates and a sky train will be constructed inside.
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one entrance. A
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right
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departures
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including a security
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passport
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gates
. Turning to the arrivals,
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passport
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customs existing on this side.
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Moving on to the after development, there will be two entrances for the
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departures
and two exits for the arrivals. In terms of the
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departures
, the café will be
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passport
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control
including one shop inside. Regarding the arrivals, a car hire area will be on the
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right
next
to the exit. The café and an ATM will be
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located
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passport
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control
customs. As for the
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gates
, there will have 18
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gates
and a sky train will
be constructed
inside.
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IELTS academic The maps provide information concerning the area of an airport now and after renovation next year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes.

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