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Alterations in Paradise Island in past and now. Task 1 Map

Alterations in Paradise Island in past and now. Task 1 Map LLYQ3

The given illustrative diagrams shows the alterations which have appeared at in Paradise island past and now Overall, it is clear that the the paradise island witnessed several numer of dramatical changes the exception of all trees in Island were cuted down whereas natural spring was remained stable First of all, all parts of island provided with footpath and cycle path The Pier have been enlarged and boat is transformed new cruise ship. Next alteration is that new swimming pool is built north-west of the paradise island. Following that, scientific resarch station is removed and new hotel complex is constructed in this area. Furthermore, new round-shaped restaurant is built in roughly centre of the island. Moreover, new cafe is erected in east of the island. Final alteration is that scenic lookout is created in near the rocks.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 illustrative diagrams This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the alterations which have appeared at in Paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 past and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now


Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 witnessed several Possible spelling mistake found.numbernuder
numer
 of Possible spelling mistake found.dramaticdramaticallygrammaticaldramaticspragmatical
dramatical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 the The usual collocation for "exception" in this context is "to" not "of". Did you mean "exception to"?exception to
exception of
 all trees in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
 were Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "cut", the past tense form of the verb 'cut'?cutcitedcuredcutemutedouted
cuted
 down whereas natural spring was remained
 stable

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, all parts of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 provided with footpath and cycle path The Pier have been enlarged
 and boat is transformed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 cruise ship. Next
 alteration is that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 swimming pool is built
 north-west of the paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Following that, scientific Possible spelling mistake found.researchres arch
resarch
 station is removed
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 hotel complex is constructed
 in this area.

Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 round-shaped restaurant is built
 in roughly Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Moreover
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
is erected
 in east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Final alteration is that scenic lookout is created
 in near the rocks. 