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The maps' illustration demonstrate the developments of the village of rye mouth from 1995 to present.

The maps' illustration demonstrate the developments of the village of rye mouth from 1995 to present. xDeD6

Overall, the suburb has showed significant changes. Golf and tennis court and car parking have been built over the period of time. A farmland and forest park which was located in the north-east of the center now transformed into a large space for golf and tennis court. A car parking facility has been built to the east of the hotel, located on the eastern side. With regard to, changes that have happened to the western side of the suburb. The road which was running in the north-south direction has been extended to the west and more houses constructed over there. The shops which have been located to the southwest has been demolished and restaurant have been constructed there. The fish market and seaport which was situated to the south of the village have been removed and accommodation facility was built. Café is remained as it is.

Overall
, the suburb has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. Golf and tennis court and car parking have been built
 over the period of time.

A farmland and forest park which was located
 in the north-east of the center This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 transformed into a large space for golf and tennis court. A car parking facility has been built
 to the east of the hotel, located on the eastern side. With regard to, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that have happened to the western side of the suburb. The road which was running in the north-south direction has been extended
 to the west and more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 constructed over there. The shops which have been located
 to the southwest has been demolished
 and restaurant have been constructed
 there. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 fish market and seaport which was situated
 to the south of the village have been removed
 and accommodation facility was built
. Café is remained
 as it is. 

IELTS academic The maps' illustration demonstrate the developments of the village of rye mouth from 1995 to present.

Academic

American English

2 paragraphs

146 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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