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The maps' illustration demonstrate the developments of the village of rye mouth from 1995 to present.

The maps' illustration demonstrate the developments of the village of rye mouth from 1995 to present. xDeD6
Overall, the suburb has showed significant changes. Golf and tennis court and car parking have been built over the period of time. A farmland and forest park which was located in the north-east of the center now transformed into a large space for golf and tennis court. A car parking facility has been built to the east of the hotel, located on the eastern side. With regard to, changes that have happened to the western side of the suburb. The road which was running in the north-south direction has been extended to the west and more houses constructed over there. The shops which have been located to the southwest has been demolished and restaurant have been constructed there. The fish market and seaport which was situated to the south of the village have been removed and accommodation facility was built. Café is remained as it is.
Overall
, the suburb has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
. Golf and tennis court and car parking have
been built
over the period of time.

A farmland and forest park which
was located
in the north-east of the center
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
transformed into a large space for golf and tennis court. A car parking facility has
been built
to the east of the hotel, located on the eastern side. With regard to,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
that have happened to the western side of the suburb. The road which was running in the north-south direction has
been extended
to the west and more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
constructed over there. The shops which have
been located
to the southwest has
been demolished
and restaurant have
been constructed
there.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
fish market and seaport which
was situated
to the south of the village have
been removed
and accommodation facility
was built
. Café
is remained
as it is.
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IELTS academic The maps' illustration demonstrate the developments of the village of rye mouth from 1995 to present.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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