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The table illustrate data regarding the time that patients spend with doctors in different ages in some country.

The table illustrate data regarding the time that patients spend with doctors in different ages in some country. 9rPa7

Overall, spending time in a consultation with doctors increases with age, except in JAPAN, INDIA and KENIA. It is obvious in most of the aforementioned countries in this table, the average time of being with doctors increases with age. For instance, the figure in FRANCE has a significant increase from 16 to 38 (minutes), similarly, the USA figure rises from 13 to 31, the ITALY from 17 to 29 and the UK from 9 to 21. CHILE has also climb but more slightly; from 32 to 39. BRAZIL also is going up, but after age 60 there is decline from 26 minutes to 20 minutes. On the other hand, JAPAN has small changes in various ages, but generally, it is almost constant. INDIA and KENYA are two countries respectively have the average time 12 minutes, 15 minutes for the youngest and 11 minutes, 10 minutes for oldest people, it shows that their average spending time with doctors has an inverse relation with increasing ages.

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