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some people believes that having theoritical knowledge is more important. others argue that which is more important is skills.

some people believes that having theoritical knowledge is more important. others argue that which is more important is skills. rYRnp
some people thinks that it is important to have a bookish knowledge, while others argue that having skills are more important. i will discuss both the points and will give my opinion on this as well. On one hand it is believed that having a bookish knowledge, makes you capable of understanding the importance, disadvantage and any deviation from normal format of a work. To exemplify, if we talk about a sewing machine, it is mandatory to have a knowledge of where to insert a thread and where to put a cloth. For the same, a manual guide is provided with every machine. Similarly, for every work there should be a basic knowledge about that. On the other hand it is also true that having skills are very important because a skill-full worker may have faced certain hurdles which may not have been mentioned in any bookish notes. A skilled worker has developed a knowledge and proficiency of doing that work without reading the guide. To illustrate, if a sewing machine is operated by a experienced worker there is no requirement to refer a book. Furthermore, both the views have there advantages in there own aspects. It is considered best when a person is having a bookish knowledge as well as skills instead of a person with lonely skilled or knowledgeable. To conclude, it can be said that both the aspects have there own benefits and drawbacks. in my opinion i believe that a skill-full person is far more better than a knowledgeable individual.
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having
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bookish
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,
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makes
you capable of understanding the importance, disadvantage and any deviation from normal format of a work. To exemplify, if we talk about a sewing machine, it is mandatory to have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
of where to insert a thread and where to put a cloth. For the same, a manual guide
is provided
with every machine.
Similarly
, for every work there should be a basic
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knowledge
about that.
On the other hand
it is
also
true that
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having
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skills
are
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very
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important
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a
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-full worker may have faced certain hurdles which may not have
been mentioned
in any
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bookish
notes. A skilled worker has developed a
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knowledge
and proficiency of doing that work without reading the guide. To illustrate, if a sewing machine
is operated
by
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a
experienced worker there is no requirement to refer a book.
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aspects. It
is considered
best when a person is
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having
a
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bookish
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knowledge
as well
as
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skills
instead
of a person with lonely skilled or knowledgeable.
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be said
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my opinion
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believe that a
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-full person is far
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more better
than a knowledgeable individual.
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IELTS academic some people believes that having theoritical knowledge is more important. others argue that which is more important is skills.

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