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The maps illustrate the past and current developments which have taken place in a particular international airport.

The maps illustrate the past and current developments which have taken place in a particular international airport. Nrryd
The maps illustrate the past and current developments which have taken place in a particular international airport. In 1930, the terminal had been situated in the center, whereas the area of terminal is expanded in these days. Besides this, runway was located in the behind of terminal, it is separated in two parts in present. Furthermore, the space which was not utilized in 1930. In next, this place is used for domestic terminal and car park, and runway -2and runway-3: is located in the south area. Moving further, in earlier time the area of Boston bay was small, whilst it has been enlarged in nowadays. Apart from this, the location of river similar in over the period. In the second map, the road on the north has been extended towards the best for traffingfrom Canberra of international airport remained untouched in all the time.
The maps illustrate the past and
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current
developments which have taken place in a particular international airport.

In 1930, the
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terminal
had
been situated
in the center, whereas the area of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
terminal
is expanded
in these days.
Besides
this, runway
was located
in the behind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
terminal
, it
is separated
in two parts in present.
Furthermore
, the space which was not utilized in 1930. In
next
, this place is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for domestic
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terminal
and car park, and runway -2and runway-3:
is located
in the south area.

Moving
further
, in earlier time the area of Boston bay was
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small
, whilst it has
been enlarged
nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: "nowadays".
in nowadays
. Apart from this, the location of river similar in over the period. In the second map, the road on the north has
been extended
towards the best for
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traffingfrom
Canberra of international airport remained untouched in all the time.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the past and current developments which have taken place in a particular international airport.

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3 paragraphs
144 words
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