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The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. GMMLB
The give two tabular chats compare the ranking of medals which are win by Norway United states Germany Russia and Canada. overall, it can be seen that maximum medals are win in summer Olympics as compared to winter Olympics. However, united states win highest medals among all the other participation. A closer look at the table chats reveal that in winter Olympics Norway get the huge medal in all times followed by other candidates.
The give two tabular chats compare the ranking of
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which are win by Norway
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Germany Russia and Canada.
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are win in summer Olympics as compared to winter Olympics.
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among all the other participation. A closer look at the table chats reveal that in winter Olympics Norway
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the huge
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in all times followed by other candidates.

IELTS academic The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.

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