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people,nowadays,are not as fit and active as they were in the past.what are the reasons for this?what measures can be taken for this?

people, nowadays, are not as fit and active as they were in the past. what are the reasons for this? what measures can be taken for this? pRR13
At the time, Public are not fit and active compare to the past. There could be multiple reasons for such a situation; whereas, some proactive suggestion can help to address the issue. Both the causes as well as measures are discussed further. There could be several reasons for the situation. The first one is that Nowadays, public are busy on hectic schedule. In other words, People have fix time table of our day and most of time spend in workplace. Therefore, They have not enough time to exercise. Moreover, Stress level increase on people. Because, They have many stress, which is related to work and home. They are spend most time in work. As a result, They body can not active in other activities. In addition, People are not talk anyone, So, They issues are solve by other people and stress increase day-by-day. In the improve the situation, some steps can be taken. To begin with, Government and media are play essential role. To illustrate, Ministers and columnists should spread about exercise and active mind. They can make some advertisement about healthfulness. Apart from this, Public can support the fit and active mind. In simple words, They should be some knowledge about fitness. They should be aware about the benefits of this. To cap it all, People can try to they are streessless. By this i mean, Stress is essential part of decline fit and active. They are become more positive and happy themselves. To sum up, it can be stated that people are not fit and active nowadays. It has many reasons, which is related to our lifestyle; however, in measure government and media are play important role. I believe that public have to knowledge about how to keep fit and active.
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are not
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and
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compare to the past. There could be multiple reasons for such a situation; whereas,
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some
proactive suggestion can
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help
to address the issue. Both the causes
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as well as
measures
are discussed
further
.

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first
one is that Nowadays,
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public
are busy on hectic schedule.
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,
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People
have
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fix
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time
table of our day and most of
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time
spend in workplace.
Therefore
, They have not
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enough
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time
to exercise.
Moreover
,
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Stress
level increase on
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people
.
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, They have
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many
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stress
, which
is related
to work and home. They are
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spend
most
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time
in work.
As a result
, They body can not
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in other activities.
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,
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People
are not talk anyone,
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, They issues are
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by other
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people
and
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increase day-by-day.

In the
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the situation,
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some
steps can
be taken
. To
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begin
with,
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Government
and media are play essential role. To illustrate, Ministers and columnists should spread about exercise and
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active
mind. They can
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make
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some
advertisement about healthfulness. Apart from this,
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can support the
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fit
and
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active
mind. In simple words, They should be
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some
knowledge about fitness. They should be aware about the benefits of this. To cap it all,
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can try to they are
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streessless
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fit
and
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. They
are become
more
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positive
and happy themselves.

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be stated
that
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people
are not
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fit
and
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active
nowadays. It has
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reasons, which
is related
to our lifestyle;
however
, in measure
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government
and media are play
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role. I believe that
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public
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have to
knowledge about how to
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keep
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fit
and
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IELTS academic people, nowadays, are not as fit and active as they were in the past. what are the reasons for this? what measures can be taken for this?

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