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The charts below show one government’s spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show one government’s spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. r88ap
The pie chart illustrates the data the proportion of four different types of art which government spent in 1995 and 2005 while the bar chart shows the number of participant joined in Arts Events in the correspoding years. Overall, the proportion of money that the government spent on the various Arts changed between 1995 and 2005 but this did not always reflect the number of people who went to Arts events Music is the most popular art form and in 1995 the government spent most money on this but the amount they spent dropped slightly in 2005. However, the number of people attending music events rose between 1995 and 2005. The theatre received a relatively small proportion of money from the government and 1995 and this rose substantially in 2005 to a similar amount as that spent on music. The number of people participating in theatre events rose only slightly, although this was the second most popular art form. In 2005, far less money was spent on the visual arts than in 1995 and the number of people participating dropped as well. The amount spent on literature in 1995 and 2005 was more or less the same and this was the least popular art form, although the number or people participating did rise slightly.
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IELTS academic The charts below show one government’s spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years.

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