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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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THE ILLUSTRATED LINE GRAPH BELOW DEPICT THE TOTAL NUMBER OF STUDENTS FROM FOREIGN COUNTRIES AND LOCAL ENROLEES IN UNIVERSITIES IN AUSTRALIA IN 10 YEARS. OVERALL, THE NUMBER OF OVERSEAS STUDENTS WHO DECIDES TO CONTINUE THEIR STUDY IN AUSTRALIA SHOWS GRADUALLY INCREASES OVER A PERIOD OF TIME WHEREAS THE LOCAL STUDENTS WHO JUST STARTED THEIR STUDY REMAINED STABLE AND UPSURGE THE TOTAL NUMBER IN 10 YEARS. TO BEGIN WITH, 20, 000 FOREIGN ENROLLEES IN 2006 DECIDED TO COMMENCE THEIR UNIVERSITY STUDY IN AUSTRALIA AND IT SHOWS AN UPWARD TREND ALSO REACHES 40, 000 STUDENTS IN 2009 AND REMAINED STABLE THE FOLLOWING YEAR. HOWEVER, THE TOTAL NUMBER OF NON LOCAL STUDENTS WHO CAME FOR FURTHER STUDY SHOWS AN UPWARD TENDENCY WITH JUST OVER 80000 STUDENTS OVER THE GIVEN PERIOD OF TIME. JUST OVER 20000 NUMER OF LOCAL STUDENTS WHO ARE LIVING IN AUSTRALIA DECIDED TO START THEIR STUDY HOWEVER IT SHOWS A SLIGHTLY DECREASING IN THE FOLLOWING YEARS AND REACHED 200, 000 IN 2010. FURTHERMORE, THE TOTAL NUMBER OF STUDENTS SHOWS GRADUALLY INCREASE THE 7 YEARS, 600000 TOTAL NUMBER OF ENROLEES WAS GATHERED AND REMAINED STABLE OVER THE GIVEN PERIOD OF TIME.
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ENROLEES
IN UNIVERSITIES IN AUSTRALIA IN 10 YEARS.

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STUDENTS
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SHOWS
GRADUALLY
INCREASES
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IN 2006 DECIDED TO COMMENCE THEIR UNIVERSITY
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80000
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