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The maps illustrate the development of a city from 1995 to the present.

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The maps illustrate the development of a city from 1995 to the present. Overall, the city has undergone dramatic changes in terms of housing, structure and facilities. On the other hand, the sea, most part of the main roads in the city, the cafe and the hotel remained the same over the period shown. In 1995, there was an area of farmland area to the north-east of the city next to a forest park that years later gave place to a golf course and tennis courts. In addition, more houses were built next to the main road. In regards to the facilities, some of them were replaced. For example, in the area where the fish market to the south-west was located, some apartments were built. Moreover, the shop was replaced by a restaurant. Furthermore, the fishing port was removed and a car park was built next to the hotel in the south-east of the city. Another change that occurred was the extension of the road in the residential area.

The maps illustrate the development of a city from 1995 to the present. Overall
, the city has undergone dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in terms of housing, structure and facilities. On the other hand
, the sea, most part of the main roads in the city, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and the hotel remained the same over the period shown.

In 1995, there was an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of farmland You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 to the north-east of the city next
 to a forest park that years later gave place to a golf course and tennis courts. In addition
, more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were built
next
 to the main road.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
In regards to
 the facilities, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them were replaced
. For example
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 where the fish market to the south-west was located
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 apartments were built
. Moreover
, the shop was replaced
 by a restaurant. Furthermore
, the fishing port was removed
 and a car park was built
next
 to the hotel in the south-east of the city. Another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 that occurred was the extension of the road in the residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 

IELTS academic The maps illustrate the development of a city from 1995 to the present.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

169 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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