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The diagram represent information about the life cycle a frog.

The diagram represent information about the life cycle a frog. 66Pdj
It is clear that, the first step is eggs are layer on water. Then, eggs are converted into embryo. The next stride is they change into tadpole. Moving the stride, the front defines break through. After that, the tadpole is long eggs. Moving further, the next stage is the start of pulmonary and breathing and toad is jumped into water in outside. next, the tadpole frog change to them. then, they ready to adult frog form and toad provide more eggs. Overall, all stride are mandatory to this whole process. on the contrary one stride is missing underwater is not complete the process.
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that, the
first
step is eggs are layer on water. Then, eggs
are converted
into embryo. The
next
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stride
is they
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change
into tadpole. Moving the
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stride
, the front defines break through. After that, the tadpole is long eggs.

Moving
further
, the
next
stage is the
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start
of pulmonary and breathing and toad
is jumped
into water in outside.
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next
, the tadpole frog
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change
to them.
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then
, they ready to adult frog form and toad provide more eggs.

Overall
, all
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stride
are mandatory to this whole process.
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on
the contrary one
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stride
is missing underwater is not complete the process.

IELTS academic The diagram represent information about the life cycle a frog.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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