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The maps illustrate information about one of the village of Stokeford.There have been done lots of changes at the village between the year 1930 and 2010.

The maps illustrate information about one of the village of Stokeford. There have been done lots of changes at the village between the year 1930 and 2010. 0Mg91
The maps illustrate information about one of the village of Stokeford. There have been done lots of changes at the village between the year 1930 and 2010. Overall, in 1930 most of the places were used as a farmland in the village, while it has been replaced by many shops in the year 2010. Although, there has been build a retirement home inside the garden in the year 2010. It is quite clear from the maps, in 1930, there were only two shops near the post office and the primary school's bulding was not so large. In addition, there was a big garden besides the school and there was a large house inside that. More ever, most of the places were occupied with farmland. On the other hand, in the year 2010, there were many new houses was constructed near the school. Therefore, they have extended the primary school's building. The large house has been replaced with Retirement home in the garden. There were no changes in Key houses during the years. Most of the the farmlands were replaced by new houses in year 2010.
The maps illustrate information about one of the village of
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Stokeford
. There have
been done
lots of
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changes
at the village between the
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year
1930 and 2010.

Overall
, in 1930 most of the places were
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used
as a farmland in the village, while it has
been replaced
by
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many
shops in the
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year
2010.
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Although
, there has been build a retirement home inside the garden in the
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year
2010.

It is quite
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clear
from the maps, in 1930, there were
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only
two shops near the post office and the primary school's
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bulding
was not
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large.
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, there was a
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big
garden
besides
the school and there was a large
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house
inside that. More ever, most of the places
were occupied
with farmland.

On the other hand
, in the
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year
2010, there were
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many
new
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houses
was constructed
near the school.
Therefore
, they have extended the primary school's building. The large
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house
has
been replaced
with Retirement home in the garden. There were no
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changes
in Key
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houses
during the years. Most of
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the the
farmlands
were replaced
by new
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houses
in
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2010.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate information about one of the village of Stokeford. There have been done lots of changes at the village between the year 1930 and 2010.

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