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The diagrams shows two different method of collecting water for irrigating. One of them need a swing basket and rope and the other needs more equipment such as a pulley, basket, rollers and soon. In the first method that is shown in picture individuals people use swing basket that is made of bamboo or leather and water transfer by this to the irrigation channel. According to the diagram this process is done by two people. On the other hand, the rope and bucket method is a little more complex. In this system the first thing that is needed is the 50 meters well and water is reserved in this place. In this way there are more tools that help to done process. There is a sloped area next to the well and to ropes connect to one ox. Ox move to down and bucket wich is connected to rops transfer water to the surface of the ground and its added to irrigation channel. Briefly, in diagram two methods are shown one of them is swing basket and the other is rope and bucket that there are used for help people to irrigation field.
The diagrams
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shows
two
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different
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method
of collecting
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water
for irrigating. One of them need a swing
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basket
and
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rope
and the other needs more equipment such as a pulley,
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basket
, rollers and
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soon
.

In the
first
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method
that
is shown
in picture individuals
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people
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use
swing
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basket
that
is made
of bamboo or leather and
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water
transfer by this to the irrigation channel. According to the diagram this process
is done
by two
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people
.

On the other hand
, the
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rope
and bucket
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method
is a
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little
more complex. In this system the
first
thing that
is needed
is the 50 meters well and
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water
is reserved
in this place. In this way there are more tools that
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help
to done process. There is a sloped area
next
to the well and to
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ropes
connect to one ox. Ox
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move
to down and bucket
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wich
is connected
to
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rops
transfer
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water
to the surface of the ground and
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its
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added
to irrigation channel.

Briefly
, in diagram two
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methods
are shown
one of them is swing
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basket
and the other is
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rope
and bucket that there are
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used
for
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help
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people
to irrigation field.

IELTS academic explain the diagram picture

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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