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The Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and today

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The figures demonstrate Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today. It is easy to comprehend that the main changes were included the stage and a big wide park at the Westland, however, a lot of different buildings were changed too. From the top left, the Snackbar was knocked down and instead of one big meeting room, two smaller ones were built which has meeting room 1 and meeting room 2 labels on the figure. In front of them, one big galley was placed which was two construction before. At the end of the side, instead of the Toilets, a Café building was constructed close to where is now planted trees and it looks like a park. On another side, a drama studio was included also the Concert-Hall/Cinema was developed for two buildings separately, one of them at the top another one is on the right side. However, this is not without untold the Toilets were moved to the down of right side. In the middle, a square Central Exhibition area was added, exactly opposite of the Information desk. On the downside, trees were planted and vegetation areas were designed. Altogether Colwick Arts Centre have more feature in comparison with 2005, besides it looks more beautiful.
The figures demonstrate Colwick Arts
Centre
in 2005 and
today
.

It is easy to comprehend that the main
changes
were included
the stage and a
big
wide park at the
Westland
,
however
,
a lot of
different
buildings were
changed
too.

From the top
left
, the
Snackbar
was knocked
down and
instead
of one
big
meeting room, two smaller ones
were built
which has meeting room 1 and meeting room 2 labels on the figure. In front of them, one
big
galley
was placed
which was two construction
before
. At the
end
of the side,
instead
of the Toilets, a Café building
was constructed
close to where is
now
planted trees and it looks like a park.

On another side, a drama studio
was included
also
the Concert-Hall/Cinema
was developed
for two buildings
separately
, one of them at the top another one is on the right side.
However
, this is not without untold the Toilets were
moved
to the down of right side.

In the middle, a square Central Exhibition area was
added
, exactly opposite of the Information desk. On the downside, trees
were planted
and vegetation areas
were designed
.

Altogether Colwick Arts
Centre
have more feature
in comparison
with 2005,
besides
it looks more
beautiful
.
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5.5
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