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explain the diagram show two methods

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the diagrams shows two different method of collecting water for irrogating. one of them need swing basket and rope and theother need more equipment such as pulley, basket, rolley so on in the dirst method that is shown in picture individuls people use swing basket that is made of bambo or leather and water tranfer by this to the irrigation channel. according to the diagram this process is done by two people. an the other hand, the rope and bucket method is a little more complex. in this system the first thing that is needed is a 50 meters well and water is reseved in this place. in this way there are more tools that help to done process. there is a slope area next to the well and to ropes connect to one oxe. oxe move to down and bucket wich is connected to rops transfer water to the surface of ground and its added to irrigation channel. brifely, in digram two methods are shown one of them is swimg basket and the other is rope and buket that their are used for help people to irrigation field.
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irrogating
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one
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and
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need more equipment such as pulley,
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rolley
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individuls
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that
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bambo
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water
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tranfer
by this to the irrigation channel.
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according
to the diagram this process
is done
by two
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people
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rope
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method
is a
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little
more complex.
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in
this system the
first
thing that
is needed
is a 50 meters well and
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is
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reseved
in this place.
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in
this way there are more tools that
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there
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next
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oxe
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oxe
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added
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two
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are shown
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swimg
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buket
that
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help
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people
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