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The maps illustrate how the town had changed after the manufacture of a hydroelectric power dam over the 10-years period starting from 1990 to 2010.

The maps illustrate how the town had changed after the manufacture of a hydroelectric power dam over the 10-years period starting from 1990 to 2010. LwYln
The maps illustrate how the town had changed after the manufacture of a hydroelectric power dam over the 10-years period starting from 1990 to 2010. Overall, it is apparent that the town experienced significant modification, the most important of which is the reduction of amenities with the expansion in the north As can be seen, the ancient structure and the natural wild habitat was demolished and replaced by an electrical area in the right hand corner of the river. On the other side of the stream, the irrigated farmland also turned into an electrical area while the villages remained intact. The north of the town, which was covered with mountains, was transformed into a hotel and a lake nearby. Moreover, the hydroelectric power dam was constructed at the north of the river
The maps illustrate how the town had
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after the manufacture of a hydroelectric power dam over the 10-years period starting from 1990 to 2010.

Overall
, it is apparent that the town experienced significant modification, the most
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important
of which is the reduction of amenities with the expansion in the north

As can be
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seen
, the ancient structure and the natural wild habitat
was demolished
and replaced by an electrical area in the
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right hand
corner of the river. On the other side of the stream, the irrigated farmland
also
turned into an electrical area while the villages remained intact.

The north of the town, which
was covered
with mountains,
was transformed
into a hotel and a lake nearby.
Moreover
, the hydroelectric power dam
was constructed
at the north of the river
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate how the town had changed after the manufacture of a hydroelectric power dam over the 10-years period starting from 1990 to 2010.

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