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temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per years in three major cities

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The liner graph provides information about the average monthly temperature in major cities and the table below shows the average number of hours of sunshine per year in London, New York, and Sydney. The data from the linear graph can be divided into two groups; group one experienced a significantly increased temperature while in July in another group temperature are decreased in the same month. London and Sydney are classified as group 1 because the temperature in these two cities is rising in July month. The temperature in London is around 25 Celsius and Sydney is 30 Celsius by the way temperatures in these two cities are dropping to a minimum on January, 10 Celsius in London and 5 Celsius in Sydney. Differently, New York temperature is maximum in January around 25 Celsius and decreased to a minimum on July 15 Celsius. Moving on to the table. The table informs about the average number of hours of sunshine, according to this information we can rearrange the data by the minimum to maximum, London 1180 H, Sydney 2473 H, and New York 2535 H. However, London has a half time of sunshine hours compared to other countries, but the temperature in London is still more than in Sydney in January because this fact we can consider as two figures are not related to each other, even though this factor affects to each other but there have too many factors involved to temperature. That we can summarize these two-figure can’t use to predict the temperature in cities.

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