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The maps illustrate how an Irish village has developed since 2000.

The maps illustrate how an Irish village has developed since 2000. m995n
The maps illustrate how an Irish village has developed since 2000. Overall, the village is becoming more crowded. It is also seen that the biggest change that was adding some new amenities, such as a park, car park, and restaurants. In 2000, there was farmland in the northwest of the village but it was flattened in present to build a new park. There was a main road running along the sea from West to East, and another running from South-North direction. The small road which is running West and is roughly parallel to the main seaside road has been expanded further westward. In addition, another new small road has been built east of the main road. There was more and more residential house has been built along with both roadsides. At present, the dock on the water in the south has been removed. The market was also destroyed and replaced by seaside restaurants. Meanwhile, the shops and the hotel on the opposite still existed. On the other hand, a car park has been built next to the hotel.
The maps illustrate how an Irish village has developed since 2000.

Overall
, the village is becoming more crowded. It is
also
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seen
that the biggest
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change
that was adding
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some
new amenities, such as a
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park
, car
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park
, and restaurants.

In 2000, there was farmland in the northwest of the village
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but
it
was flattened
in present to build a new
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park
. There was a main
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road
running along the sea from West to East, and another running from South-North direction. The
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small
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road
which is running West and is roughly parallel to the main seaside
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road
has
been expanded
further
westward.
In addition
, another new
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small
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road
has
been built
east of the main
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road
. There was more and more residential
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house
has
been built
along with both roadsides.

At present, the dock on the water in the south has
been removed
. The market was
also
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destroyed
and replaced by seaside restaurants. Meanwhile, the shops and the hotel on the opposite
still
existed.
On the other hand
, a car
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park
has
been built
next
to the hotel.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate how an Irish village has developed since 2000.

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