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The map shows the changes in Felixstone in 1967 and 2001.

The map shows the changes in Felixstone in 1967 and 2001. yDDbM
The given maps illustrates the alterations to that took place in an area, named, Felixstone from 1967 to 2001. Overall, it is manifest that the most significant changes were noticed in the east throughout the given time period while, there was no change in the western part of the city By analysing the data, in 1967, it was observed that shops were built in the high street. However, on the right side of the high street, shops were converted into apartments. Apart from this, there was a farmland in the extreme east in 1967. Nevertheless, this was demolished, new swimming pool, hotel along with tennis court were constructed for inhabitants of Felixstone. From 1967 to 2001, golf course remained in the identical location. Furthermore, in 2001, hotel provided car parking service that was not available 27 years ago. Moreover, Private beach in 2001 was a replacement of fish market. In the extreme northwest new wind turbines were established near dunes. In addition, No changes can be seen in the position of hotel and cafe between 1967 and 2001.
The
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given
maps illustrates the alterations to that took place in an area, named,
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Felixstone
from 1967 to 2001.

Overall
, it is manifest that the most significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
were noticed
in the east throughout the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
time period while, there was no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the western part of the city

By
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analysing
the data, in 1967, it
was observed
that shops
were built
in the high street.
However
, on the right side of the high street, shops
were converted
into apartments. Apart from this, there was a farmland in the extreme east in 1967.
Nevertheless
, this
was demolished
, new swimming pool, hotel along with tennis court
were constructed
for inhabitants of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Felixstone
. From 1967 to 2001, golf course remained in the identical location.

Furthermore
, in 2001, hotel provided car parking service that was not available 27 years ago.
Moreover
, Private beach in 2001 was a replacement of fish market. In the extreme northwest new wind turbines
were established
near dunes.
In addition
, No
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in the position of hotel and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
between 1967 and 2001.
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