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The maps illustrate an island in the period before the touristic attractions and buildings were constructed and after this.

The maps illustrate an island in the period before the touristic attractions and buildings were constructed and after this. brODX
The maps illustrate the differences between an island before and after touristic attractions were constructed. Taking the whole diagram together it can be clearly seen that the palm trees and the right side of the island (around 50 m^ 2) remain untouched. The size of the island is approximately 1000 m^2. Starting from the left side of the island, the first thing that is encountered are five small lodges that have been erected, surrounding three small palm trees. The lodges are connected by means of a footpath, which also links them to the swimming beach, that is roughly ten meters away from the cabins. In the middle west of the island, right next to the touristic accommodation, a reception has been constructed. A few meters north from this, lies a big restaurant at the bank of the sea. On the contrary, south to the reception, a pier has been constructed, which sailors may use to dock the boats. A vehicle track runs form the pier to the restaurant, surrounding the reception and connecting the middle area with the footpath for the lodges on the left. Right next to the reception, some more cabins have been built up in a circle, which are also connected by means of a footpath. The remaining part of the island is a traffic free area that still keeps the original flora of the territory.
The maps illustrate the differences between an
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island
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before
and after touristic attractions
were constructed
.

Taking the whole diagram together it can be
clearly
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seen
that the palm trees and the right side of the
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island
(around 50
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m^
2) remain untouched. The size of the
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island
is approximately 1000 m^2.

Starting from the
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left
side of the
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island
, the
first
thing that
is encountered
are five
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small
lodges that have
been erected
, surrounding three
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small
palm trees. The lodges
are connected
by means of a footpath, which
also
links them to the swimming beach,
that is
roughly ten meters away from the cabins.

In the middle west of the
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island
, right
next
to the touristic accommodation, a
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reception
has
been constructed
. A few meters north from this, lies a
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big
restaurant at the bank of the sea.

On the contrary
, south to the
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reception
, a pier has
been constructed
, which sailors may
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use
to dock the boats. A vehicle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
runs form the pier to the restaurant, surrounding the
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reception
and connecting the middle area with the footpath for the lodges on the
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left
.

Right
next
to the
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reception
,
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some
more cabins have
been built
up in a circle, which are
also
connected by means of a footpath. The remaining part of the
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island
is a traffic free area that
still
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keeps
the original flora of the territory.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate an island in the period before the touristic attractions and buildings were constructed and after this.

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