Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The provided graph details the mean temperature of 3 cities within 1 year.

The provided graph details the mean temperature of 3 cities within 1 year. yDgLE

The provided graph details the mean temperature of 3 cities within 1 year. Overall, there is a fluctuation in the temperature of 3 cities; both Paris and Boston peak in the mid-year period, while Melbourne follows an opposite trend. Looking at Boston, in January, it has the lowest temperature of the 3 cities with only under 5 degrees. It then starts to rapidly rise, overtake Paris and Melbourne in the second half of April, and reach the top of almost 35 degrees in August, the highest temperature of all cities observed in any month. From this point, Boston becomes cooler quickly and drops to precisely 5 degrees this December, the lowest of 3 cities in that month. Similarly, Paris, commencing at about 8 degrees, also climbs up to the apex of beneath 25 degrees in July. Afterward, the city’s temperature remains the same in one month before plummeting to roughly 10 degrees in December. Conversely, Melbourne registers an intriguing trend as its starting point is above 25 degrees, which is way higher than the other cities. Instead of going up, Melbourne slowly declines and bottomed out at over 15 degrees in July. At this moment, the city warms up and leads the data in December with the same temperature as that of January.

The provided graph This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 the mean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 of 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 within 1 year.

Overall
, there is a fluctuation in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 of 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
; both Paris and Boston peak in the mid-year period, while Melbourne follows an opposite trend.

Looking at Boston, in January, it has the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 of the 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 under 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
. It then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 to rapidly
 rise, overtake Paris and Melbourne in the second half of April, and reach the top of almost 35 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in August, the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 of all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 observed in any month. From this point, Boston becomes cooler quickly
 and drops to precisely
 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 this December, the lowest of 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 in that month. Similarly
, Paris, commencing at about 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
, also
 climbs up to the apex of beneath 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in July. Afterward, the city’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 remains the same in one month This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 plummeting to roughly 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in December.

Conversely
, Melbourne registers an intriguing trend as its starting point is above 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
, which is way higher than the other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. Instead
 of going up, Melbourne slowly
 declines and bottomed out at over 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in July. At this moment, the city warms up and leads the data in December with the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 as that of January. 