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It is clear that men give more time for leisure activities while women for household ones.

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To begin, 137 minutes are wasted by males in order to watch TV and videos and to listen to the radio every day when females spend 19 minutes less than men. For reading, women tend to spend 1 minute more than men in Britain (19 minutes). Finally, according to the table males and females give 15 and 11 minutes for sports daily respectively. As regards household chars in the UK, cooking, and washing are mainly done by females by spending around an hour and a half, however, males time is around half an hour. Approximately 25 minutes is spent by males while females' spending is more than 30 minutes. Only when it comes to repairing something men spend about 10 minutes more than women ( 19 minutes). Washing of clothes and ironing them take around 30 minutes from females and approximately 10 minutes from males.

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