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The table illustrates the percentage of national consumer expenditure by category in five different counries in 2002.

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The table illustrates the percentage of national consumer expenditure by category in five different counries in 2002. In 2002 citizents of Ireland used 28. 91% of their money on consumables making Ireland the country with the second biggest percentage after turkey. Ireland is in third place for clothing with 6. 43% and fourth place for leasure and education with 2. 21%. Italy spent only 16. 36% on food which is less than Ireland but they are in first place for clothing with 9%. Spain follows the general rule and the money used for consumales has the biggest percentage with 18. 80% and Leasure is in last place with 1. 9% which means Spain is the country which spent the least in education. Overall it can be seen that most money was spent on consumables such as food, with Turkey having the biggest percentage of all the countries, while leasure and education had the smallest fraction of all the categories. The money spent on clothing was lesser than than food but more than leasure.
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on consumables making Ireland the country with the second biggest
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after turkey. Ireland is in third
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for clothing with 6. 43% and fourth
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