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The given bar graph compares the number of film release and their ticket sales for four different categories both 1996 and 2006.

The given bar graph compares the number of film release and their ticket sales for four different categories both 1996 and 2006. RVWVp

The given bar graph compares the number of film release and their ticket sales for four different categories both 1996 and 2006. As an overall trend, it can be seen that drama and comedy films were more popular than, while the other two types of films were least popular in this timeframe. With regards to drama, the percantage of films released stood at just over 25% in 1996. After this year, its trend went up dramatically at almost 35%. Between 1996 and 2000, there was a slight increase in the number of comedy films, to 25% at the end of the period. In addition to them, the ticket sales for drama remained stable and reached nearly 17%. However, for comedy, it showed an upward trend, rose to just under 25%. On the other hand, the number of romance films remained stable at approximately 5%. In contrast, fantasy films rose by nearly 7% in four years. Moreover, the percantage of cinema tickets for romance one decreased sharply, and it saw the lowest point at under 5% in 2000. In terms of the sales of fantasy, tickets increased gradually and it jumped to just over 5% over a period.

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