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The maps given below illustrate that structure of the centre of a town name Islip.The first map shows the view of city centre at presently,while other one gives the information about planned development of the city.

The maps given below illustrate that structure of the centre of a town name Islip. The first map shows the view of city centre at presently, while other one gives the information about planned development of the city. gbyDL
The maps given below illustrate that structure of the centre of a town name Islip. The first map shows the view of city centre at presently, while other one gives the information about planned development of the city. Overall, currently there are no car parking option available in the city centre. In addition, there is also lack of a Bus station. On the other hand, in the planned development, these facilities are going to add in the city centre. More ever, there are also a dual carriageway going to build in the centre. It is quite clear from the first map, at present, there are just a small shops besides the main road of the centre and there is a lack of car parking in the city. Even, there is no any road connecting school to the area of the park in the centre. Whereas, in planned development, they are going to build a separate car parking for public as well as there is also addition of a new dual carriageway road in the centre of the city. In addition, they are going to construct a new Bus station, new housings and a shopping centre along with the shops in the centre.
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lack of a Bus station.
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. More ever, there are
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a dual carriageway going to build in the
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centre
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a lack of car
parking in the city. Even, there is
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any road connecting school to the area of the park in the
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centre
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Whereas, in planned development, they are going to build a separate car parking for public
as well
as there is
also
addition of a new dual carriageway road in the
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centre
of the city.
In addition
, they are going to construct a new Bus station, new housings and a shopping
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centre
along with the shops in the
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IELTS academic The maps given below illustrate that structure of the centre of a town name Islip. The first map shows the view of city centre at presently, while other one gives the information about planned development of the city.

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